Just had a listen. Well the melody seems very nice Phil, it just flows perfectly, can't say I noticed any guitar parts in there that didn't fit. It's dynamic and not boring at all, so I must say that is well done. Not sure completelly about the vocals though, it seems that your voice fades away a bit somewhere in the middle of the song, it seems that guitar overscreams your voice there, and it goes back again in the last part of the song. So you might wanna check the volume balance right there. As for the song itself, I must say it's a great piece of work you did there Phil, I envy you (light jelousy ofcourse ) .